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Old 12-02-03, 07:43 AM   #9
Dadi Kewl
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From: England
IP:

Nice battle...expected more from a contnedorship match

Your character is developing and "All the World's A Stage"
^Loved that line (dunno why i just did)

Skiddz. i've seen better, but your verse was aigh
a dofferent approach to the topic...a nice concept
Flow was solid, imagery was good...a mediocre level
of creativity...

Rob.D. I liked it, Simplistic flow to a thinking piece
your scheme was nice, and filled it with imagery
Creativity was good and a nice approach to the concept

Close...but Rob.D was one step up on most aspects

V. Rob.D