Phayme sure does have some nice pics going...

Rhymes? Eh.

Rule takes this with better vocab, complexity, punches, and flow...
Some of those multi's were pretty sweet.

Work on making ya shit a bit more personal...

But other than that, nice work.

Phayme...

Nice work, but way too simple and with stretched ass lines.

Stretched lines hurt flow...

Especially when some of ya rhyme scheme's a bit off like yours was.

Some of ya punches were ok, like ya "battle himself" line...

But even that's a bit played.

Peace

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