it did start and finish off nicely, but if you really did ruh this then, i advise for your next open mic, that you take your time. cause you got some potential.


some opf the lines seemed a little forced to me, work on structure and wordplay.

aiight

peace

and please drop some feedback on 'breaking...' by yours truely and white lightning.

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