Hmm also i didnt notice your piece...so now ill critique it...


um pretty easy piece..nothing abstract found a couple parts a bit lacking..like this one

Happy again
All because I wanted them to have a ball

All in all decent piece nothing spectacular but easy to the eyes indeed...

i just want to note to Gonzo your piece wasnt bad i just think being published now days is easy which really makes it meaningless....yah hear...Write a book and get a publisher to press it.....thats a goal of mine...

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