You had a dope rhyme scheme here...the flow was basically 'off-the-hook'.....every bar was simply a lyrical excelliancy. You had dope internals..flow as i said was immense...smooth.

Liked the topic behind it.. pieces like this are what in my opinion keep Open Mic alive.... love shit like this.... you used the right words, right phrases to really express your feelin's here..i loved the real gritty emotional bars that you used here...dope...

Nothing to critize to be honest..full well deserved 5/5 - not too many pieces get that from me... we gotta hook up sometime dawg...

keep this shit up..