This wasnt bad actually .. I really got into Unique's verse, he's pretty decent. Flow, internals and multi's worked well .. contenet got shaky at times and wavered a little of topic but he picked it back up well ..
Keymo .. you seemed to try to get too many multi's into each bar and that threw the flow to me, content suffered a lot because of that .. although, you actually stuck to the topic fairly where, got your point across which i thought was done well .. writers voice was there, transition was actually good, its just your flow that could use work .. dont try to force every line with multi's, it takes away from your content, use them .. just dont over-use them if you get my point.
Decent collab though overall.
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95933