Gonna have to throw my vote to Rob Van Dam or whoever...

That was just a very cool, very sweet rhyme.
Simple as all get out. True, true.
But the message was deep as fuck, you provided good imagery, and you laid down shit I could relate to.
I love watching my wife sleep.
It's true, when they're asleep, they have no flaws...
But when they wake up, woah!

Skiddz...

As a dad, I can also relate to your verse.
But, something about this just lacked.
Maybe it was imagery, maybe it was message.
I'm not sure.
Nice advice to ya kid and shit...
Just wasn't feelin it like I was the other.

Peace

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