Thread: Alone In The Dark
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Old 12-02-03, 06:15 PM   #3
rule
..Soft Focus..
 
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the flow was kinda off, but all in all the emotion and energy wa great had a lot of outstanding lines and some great vocab keep it up...can ye peep my soft focus poem thanks
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