u want my honest op aight...it was a good "speech" fa sure and had strong lines but..you were alil contradictory of yourself..it could use alil work but like u said u wrote it the way it came and the way u felt and i respect that..so good job..

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my head is clouded with senseless doubt
but this seems to be my only escape route
so ill slither my way across the ground
to avoid my blyndedsoul from being found
~*~YOU LIVE YOU LEARN~*~