Edicius, Your Verse Lacked A Consistent Flow, Which Turned Me Off. Your Words Came Across Well, But The Flow's Inconsistency Brought Your Shit Down Alot.

Potent. . I've Definately Seen ALOT Better From You. That Shit Is Extremely Short, And It Felt Like A Cliff Hanger Verse. Meaning You Left Me Hanging And Expecting Something More. Droppin 10 Lines Like That Isn't Good, Next Time Make Longer Lines If You Know You'll Have Only 10 To Do. You Disappointed Me On This.

This Coulda Been A Helluva Lot Better Considering What I've Seen From Both Of You. This Doesn't Change The Fact That You're Both Dope, But It Didn't Help Your Cause.

-Formula.

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