everyone always says sumtin bout my structure, i dont know if its me but am i doin sumtin wrong. or is it just da way yall battle around here?

sample:
destroyin~my~foes, breakin~ya~bones from head~to~toe, ya cant heat up a battle so u "spit~shit~cold"/

ima spik havin better "rhymes" then flip~mode, ill take every stolen word from ya mouth and leave ya wit a "stripped~throat"/

my montrous rhymes are scarin ya-have ya runnin~out~ya~house, when dis nigga says hes "a hard nigga" it just means dat watchin black ppl leaves him "Seriously~aroused", da truth is killa class couldnt spit hot shit if he had diareha comin~out~da~mouth!!/


yall tell me wats wrong wit dat?

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