Flyweight
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IP:
this shit was wack as hell. Both need to elevate; back me up on this someone. JW took this only because he had ONE hard punch:
Fag sucked so many dicks he dun look like Michael Jackson/
Biography, nigga he, ain’t got non/
He done left out wu his paps is –Elton John/
And his momz go by the name Denis(e) Rodman/
walla was wack AGAIN! you need to elevate.
JW, try to make more of your lines flow, like you did with these ive put above. A lot of the line were left hanging for dead.
vote: JW
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