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Originally posted by wogzta
you just got owned you stupid fuck.
and yes, the open mic wasnt really that good. you only ever rhymed max. 2 syllables, the topic was played, and it didnt flow through too well. Get some originality, use some advanced rhyming techniques, and take Get Rich Or Die Tryin' out of your cd player.
3/10
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Settle young pup. This topic USED to be played out not anymore. Whats played out is this god daymn negative peices.. and they all sound the same. Some arent even real. You ask what makes a good peice? When its REAL and when the readers could actually feel what your spiting and it touches you.. thats what makes a good peice in my books. Altho that was his first drop it wasnt bad for his first timer.
I know the difference between a thug and trick//
One remains poor, while the other gets rich//
Jyeh thats real game. Hustling baby, pimping.. this could be interpeted many ways. You either playing or geting played, your a symp or a pimp, a thug or a trick. There is no equality in this world.
Check out his other drop
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96136
Now thats real shyt and im feeling it that without a doubt it. Dont care how many times it rhymes. Beats half the shyt i read here in my opinion.
"Get some originality"
Thats what more then half you cats need.
"and take Get Rich Or Die Tryin' out of your cd player."
Uh..
Keep writing 80SHOTS Nice start.