the beat does need a little more bass, the beat a simple one that you made or whoever, sound like that programme.... cant remember what it called. lol


you got some nice lyrics, the flow aint that best, the second guy pretty much same.
you both need to put a lil more emotion in your voice, sound like you whisperin.

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