tight man...ballads can be appealing if you use the right wording...
and you did so...i enjoyed reading it...i feel bad for jack...but i guess thats
how it usually is in life...sacrifices must be made...nice vocab...and nice
rhymes...ima give it a 9/10...keep it up

and if you can...please check out my [Love at first site] thread
thanx man

peACE