your scheme always has me reading the first couplet more then once to get the feel for the flow - but usually i can see it's slower then other pieces, almost a poetic flow to it

something similar to old fashioned literature - the couplets are packed with a lot of alliteration, and syllable schemes

i loved the following bars the most -

"An earpiece applicance that overhauls defiance with hate calls
whats the threat of death when living life is already so painful?"

good piece, yo - hit me back if you got the time