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Originally posted by Masta C
Ok...your structure needs some work, you shouldnt put it in paragraph form, put it line on top of line
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^this is very important^
esp. when u wanna give us a real good sense of ur flow, otherwise we may not hear it or rap it tha same way u would n it may sound wrong to us but completely fine to u...
tha vocab needs some work, u had some real simple words n some real simple rhymes, jus keep at it...
elevation is tha key...