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Old 12-03-03, 06:46 PM   #2
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This was a pretty good collab.....both of you came nicely i thought....Robo should work on his structure a bit though and try to make his lines around the same length so its structured pretty well, other than that his verse was pretty good i thought....deva's verse was structured nicely i thought....his vocab was good like usual lol...and both had pretty good flow....overall i thought this was a good collab..keep at it.
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