woow i really liked it

great imagary on the storm and i felt your emotions, flow was nice..only a couple of slow spots

im sorry your gettin slept on i feel the pain

thats the only problem here is how much sleeping goes on its incredibly weak...its not that hard to type up a some quick feedback for someone, cause i know for a fact that pointers help and can really up people skills...

anyone thanks for peeping my stuff and given me a shout out much appreciated...

i think ill write a peice about sleepin

keep it up man