tru,im half white,n u kinda makin us sound very fukked up,like we aint possed 2 b rappin,so fix dat pronto kila,cuz white niggaz comin thru...as far as ya flow,ya vocab waz aiight in the very beginin but da way u wrote da shit it didnt seem 2 fit 2getha ya kno,felt forced,da rest waz simple as far as lyrics go,but it all flowed 2getha on da same level,if i waz u id work on smoothin ya flow out,1~IMAG