not a bad drop. it was easy to follow. flowed well. nice use of vocab. had some multis in there. be careful tho with the multis because sometimes you get too caught up on em and your overall peice looses its meening/point or focus. but you pulled it off well. good stuff

favorite line - ...getting angered to the edge,like a d-tone in Mozart

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