ive never rated or judged a topic before...but here it goes:

I give my vote to rhymes because he had a much better and easier to read verse..he actually went into the "topic' and explained everything clearly...rule you wrote your peice as if this were an actuall battle..you verse wasnt bad i just think you took this seriously..therefor rhymes get my vote...

no.hate...keep at it ya'll...good work by both..