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Old 12-04-03, 02:27 AM   #1
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Chaos of Conflicting Thoughts

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Ok this peice is very deep, and i hope you guys can get all the metaphors and fully comprehend the lines.

I'm dead awake sleeping, deep thoughts creep in
Apathetic weaping, glorious vicacious reaping
Boundless imperfections, un-unified sections
Uncontagious infections, unneeded painless injections
Intact thoughts shattered, mind under matter
Decending stepless ladders, atomic bonds scattered
Illiterate idiot producing genious literature compositions
Weak spirited strong willed uncunning running competition
Moronic oblique dissing, a microphone who won't listen
Polished diamond mind...that glitters but fails to glisten
Honest vandals lying, immortal memories dying
Dry-eyed crying,...wing-less angels flying
A sunny day clouded, a messiah's preachings doubted
A whisper being shouted, religious ideas rerouted
Families united in hate, pearly gates turn to discriminate
Brothers that can't relate, an undestined clear fate
How can this be?,... Is my mind's eye blind?
What is the key?... To rewind time's line?
Surviving my body rots, empty stomach in endless knots
These are the effects in manifesting Chaos of Conflicting Thoughts
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