okay um that beat was nice...

back up from tha mic an turn ya vocals up when your done.....
do a compression on your vocals i think that will help....

your bars are to short longen em up some you sont wanna let tha beat kill you daddy you gotta kill that shit....

uhruh....get cocky wit while you spittin be thinkin cant nobody fuck wit me so ya confidence will come across(but you really gotta believe it tho) lol......

keep droppin.....