a lotta mixed bars you do need to work on your structure.
this is text, so it dosent really matter if it works on audio, use multies, so it ryhmes out lound an still looks good in text.

it was an aiight concept.
good drop
keep it up

peep 'racist' when i post it up in a few mins

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