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IP:
This battle was arright. Not too bad on both ya parts.
Kautious:
it's natural instincts to -mark- a newb with a -9- but in this case it'll be a -1-/
No real guns seeing how im battling with a fake thug trying tah be one/
^decent opener -better wit' the explanation.
"I bet they call u slip cuz u always just shit ur self thinking to run/
no blames, I out weigh you in this match like M.jackson v.s big pun/
^lmao, nice snap.
so sure, back away from ur screen, im liable to make u fly back in yea seat n rupture yea spleen/
a lyrical fiend to tap pressure in yea cerebrum, your thoughts kid i feel em/
^Structure kind of suffered here
Sad to see that some shit is -ILL-, it's to bad -u can't see- em/
yea eyes is looking at a killa's lyrics to bad you can't be em/
^didn't see a use for this line.
~~~finisher~~~
nigga i'll keep yea body down in the basment like tigers carrer on BET/
You'll get played while i get payed like bujus video u wasting money in the game, jus walk away free........../
^again, structure suffered here, but a pretty decent close...
Slipt, for a newb, you're comin' out pretty well.
Slipt's verse:
//~Lets see the facts, im stacked under k-9 in these rhymes
Kautious so many times, that he stays in the front lines~//
^nice opener -good snap-back
//~Battlin newbs to abuse, but this newb aint here to lose
If I gave you the right desicion, you still would'nt choose~//
^lmao, tight line.
//~I'll fuck you and your whole vendetta,im packin cheddar
Tuck ma 9's in ma And 1 socks cause im ten times betta~//
^haha, anotha good line.
//~I'll have you in cardiac arrest, like anastedic ear muffs
No body feelin ya best, plus i got ya heart in hand-cuffs~//
^decent line -lil' played tho
//~Yea, mike would win,cause pun long gone in his casket
Kautious about his skin, so like mike he just mask it~//
^this was arright, could have been a harder close.
Flow: Slipt
Punches: Tie
Opener: Kautious
Closer: Kautious
Structure: Slipt
Metas: Slipt
Vote: Slipt -just edged it.
I'll post at 100, but that's my input.
HIT MY BATTLEZ HONESTLY FOR ME
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