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Old 12-04-03, 12:46 PM   #12
Chrit
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Vote- Born to Kill...

More consistent verse...

And so Token doesnt bitch I'll break the verse down real quick like

Token ain't nothin, just a boy pushed over the edge...
So he polished up his image, by sprayin himself with Pledge.
Decent worpdplay... average punch
I'm here ta help, remove the whackness from this assassin...
But it's hard, yo...I take it out, and he just puts it back in.
Average bar... second line was decent
I can tell you been practicing, tryin ta elevate I guess...
It's clear you don't suck anymore, but you don't suck any less.
I like this bar... second line was nice
So take that Black Tie, and wrap it tight around ya neck...
Commit suicide for RB, and you may finally get respect.
Slightly played... but first line was still decent
Then we'd all be thankfull, that this turkey exists no more...
Since Christmas is gettin close, you'd be givin what we wished for.
Original concepts here... average closer

Born To Kill must be joking, this wack head's gone mental
Your wins are exactly like your life.. accidental
Played ass second line... in fact I've used this line
Your existance is limited to a certain amount of wackness
With lines that repel everything.. Even electro-magnets
Meh... using the wackness concept two bars in a row is bad
Impossible to withstand me.. Like a legendary land tree
Your shit could leave kids sadder than Christmas without family
First line was filler... second was decent
Don't be ashamed of your age, As long as you believe
Who knows, Maybe you'll score a wife and let go of RB
Age punches are getting old with BTK... been done so many ways... most of them better than this one
Look at it this way, If wackness was dope, you'd be weed
Your pre written shit is no match for me..
..Like an exotic car in the street
.. This was just like you.. Key'd
last line was decent... set-up was extremely played

So...
BTK wins coming less played....
Not great verses but BTK edges it