This was a good topic but I've seen better from both....especially you double-0 seven. That might be coz it was a difficult topic to write on, I dont know.

TAG....your verse was pretty simple and I wasnt feelin the flow a lot even tho you had goods points.

"After this yall can't do nothin but respect what I say
The day I let ya bring me down, I'll lead the KKK"

^^This was your best bar in my opinion....it showed that your detirmined not to be beaten. Overall you need to add more words that rhyme in your lines and be little more creative. The prison soap line was a bit corny.

double-0 seven....I know you can do better. Your structure was fine but again, like TAG's it seemed like a lot of it was forced and didnt come easily into your head.

"personally i aint the product of my own races actions,
im my own person, turn on me like changin radio stations,"

^^That was your best line. What you both needed to do was spend a little more time thinkin bout your verse's. I dunno how long you spent on this but I know ya's can do better.

Overall - 7/10

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