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Old 12-04-03, 01:10 PM   #4
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My flows are like virgins, cause ya know they come tight
PLAYED LINE POP.
OTHER THEN THAT SIMPLE YET CATCHY AND THAT IS GOOD FOR THIS BUT IT WILL NEED MORE COMPLEXITY AS YOU POST MORE TRACKS EITHER WAY IT WAS A GTOOD START BUT I KNOW SEVERAL ASIANS THAT CAN RIP PRETTY GOOD AT LEAST FLOW CONSITANT...OVER ALL GOOD VERSE WORTH CHECKIN MORE WORK FROM YOU.

007-YOU TARGETED THE TOPIC ALOT BETTER IN YOUR VERSE BY USING A CONCIOUS ASPECT UNLIKE TAG WHO USED BASIC BATTLE FORMAT.IT WAS REFLECTENT OF MORE EMOTION.
SOME LINES DIDNT FLOW AS WELL BUT GOT THE POINT ACROSS WHICH IS JUST AS GOOD AS BAD. OVER ALL YOU HAD THE BETTER GRASP ON TOPIC IN MY OPINION BUT THE COLLAB LACKED COMPLEXITY.THE IDEAS WERE GOOD AND GIVEN MORE EFFORT I THINK IT WOULD OF CAME BETTER.

STILL A GOOD COLLAB AND ATTEMPT AND WORTH UPPIN......7/10
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