I really don't want any beef for my critique. I'm just giving an honest opinion. This piece, while I know it was a keystyle, just seemed real amateurish. The first verse I liked. It had some nice multies, but from there it just deteriorated into a bunch of bragadocious lines. While that style can be tight if it has nice wordplay in it, this piece was pretty basic. I don't mean to be too harsh, I know this is just a keystyle, but I have seen other keystyles that are a lot better. I think if you worked on your vocab and wordplay and a little on your structure, you could have some real nice drops in the future.