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Yeah, G-1's verse was better than E-L's, but they were both decent. E-L had a nice little line with that dick-hickey shit. Made me laugh a lil bit. I think if you upped your vocab and maybe threw in a few more multies your shit would be real ill. G-1, your verse was nice, but that "Quotation Marks" shit can get annoying. Most cats are smart enough to catch the punches without them, so I'd leave em off from now on. But from your verse I can see you're decent with the multies and your wordplay's pretty good too. The only thing I could see that needed work, was in both of your verses, yall seemed to lack focuse a little. You should pick a topic and stick to it. But nice drops from both of yall.
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