Klippz you opened this piece very well.. flow was good.. tight multis..you could use w/p or metas to make it dope.. this is the first time i read your pieces but they're good.. rule you've elevated.. but you know theres alot of room for improvement.. but yours was good.. structure is unneccesary but you can do it.. Do you remember when I had mastered it!.. now i go for the beter mor complex flow.. but the content of yours was okay.. there was no lines with good w/p or metas.. nor did I find any poetic lines.. which everyone subconsciuosly likes cuz they try to figure the other meaning out..

Overall: This was a good collab.. Go and reply indepth to mine like I have to yours.. That means reading it and understanding w/p and metas.. = )