it was basic n simple but tha flow was there... not a bad piece if u atempted to take ur time to organize it better...

one thing i would change: don't force tha vocab, vocab is good, yes, but not everything...also try some multis, they are pretty much tha hottest way to make a flow better...
add some complexity as well, esp. for text...

overall: real nice, deep piece...keep up and elevate...

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