yo man go reply to 3 other open mics and leave the links to them in here or this wil get deleted. and for a breakdown and the only thing I gotta say is don't write your bars like that. makes it really really really hard to read and figure out where your flow is comin from, work on structure and how to build your lines, if u need any help go peep the wackness emergency center forum and go through some of the examples and such there. elevate bro. peace.

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