Thread: "Why Do I Not"
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Old 12-04-03, 07:15 PM   #11
sal-v
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beat isnt the greatest. but you know what youre doing. now you just have to make everything mesh well. change up is good. add a few beat breaks and a second higher pitched melody.

lyrics werent amazing - but they werent horrible - nice steez

feelin your flow

keep shit up - ill keep an eye out

pz..1
-sal
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