tight verse, props, i felt the flow and rhythm, one mistake...
the only one i can think of is when you wrote "mans" there's no such
word but oh well. one small mistake. the verse was tight tho. no doubt.
felt the vocab. nice topic also. sometimes i'd like to think i'm a soldier. lol.
maybe its just me. who cares anyway. alright 9.5/10
check out my "love at first site" thread if ya could pleaze
thanx
peACE