hmm...the beat - woulda been aight if the kick wasn't hittin every beat....n a hard snare added in. plus the piano riff speeds up when it pitch shifts....still, for a first beat at least it had a nice kick to it.

flow was aight. sumtimes the dubs make it seem a bit mumbled. on point fo sure. chorus...haha...a bit corny but considerin u sayin u don't give a fuck...i think it works in the context of the lyrics.

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