[Kclipz 4 Murkin]
You opened this joint like a virgin being split..you ripped the shit dawg. You had tight multi's n' internals...with real meaning behind the rhymes, you didn't just spit shit for the sake of it..i can see you spent time on this..nig props.....

"Suicide ran through my mind multiple times
But cutting never answered, jus put'em in ryhmes" -
immaculate

[Rule]
You had another dope verse....the rhymes scheme and bar length was dope..it flowed smooth as fuck, it never fell off. You gave us good imagry in here, good use of words and phrases which you used intelligantly to get the message across. Could have sued some internals..but it was still brilliantly executed.... Keep the shit up!

4/5 - Whoa!