Mona Lisa.
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it was a nice piece..followed the planned outline from the go n flowed well in most parts,i jus found myself driftin n having to pick the flow up again sumtimes but you redeamed it by vast amount of effort,storyline n vocab which made the piece very nice to read..
good overall piece=9/10
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