nice. breakdown:

Edicus-had trouble with the flow a little. but it was nice. i can
tell that its a good one for audio maybe. but it was nice. sum
lines were stretched tho. vocab came nice. nice topic and enjoyed
the wordplay in it. tight if you ask me. 8/10

Hook-decent.l ast line was nice. first was ok.

Rhytmic-nice overall verse. easy read and enjoyable. i didn't get
some parts tho. like the mentioning of emcees and wutever. but
if you exclude it then it was a well written verse. flowed nicely
and the stayed out topic. props. 8.5/10

check my thread wen i post it up please.
peACE