You need to leave 3 links or 3 names of people you left feedback to or this will get closed/deleted...and you should have just posted both things in just one post...

But this was pretty emotional piece i thought....i felt the emotion, kind of more of poetic piece i think....but it was a good read, i felt this piece...lines were kinda long due to structure but it could be fixed but other than that it was pretty good read....keep at it.