Emotional piece......this seems to be more of a spoken word thing rather than....fuck it......

The opener was probably the best
"Holding this crumpled picture between my two thumbs, seeing your beautiful smile, your white lace gloves.

Picture Perfect Memory."

The rest of it just kind of told what was being felt......didn't really offer too much creativity.....great emotion though....just work on diction and technique with using metaphors and such.