Poetry is not just 'pre-written' stuff. Not at all. A keystyle can quite easily be poetry. And rap and all these open mics are in a sense, poetry. Though we got to differentiate a bit on here..

This was good. I liked how you mixed your 'knoiwledge' of certain things with your everyday 'vocab' as such.

You did seem to rummage through some of the deep and dark regoins of yourself. And you came out with some revealing things. Along with some quite interesting stuff in general. Fanning the smoke of certain philosophical (and what not) issues.

Nice, man.

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