First part was fantastic for a newb
but u fell off, should of kept with the
topic of the mountain.
like describe the wind
ex.
being that the wind is motherly abandoment
though she keeps in time with slamin me to the pavement.
something like that, that explains what keepin u down
off the peak.
leave three links in a post so that this doesnt
get deleted.

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