Gangster- Liked the trix line and ther hearse one wasn't bad either. And not to hate on you or anything, but a couple of your lines seemed to be off. Somone mentioned this lin...."Go beat off bout a dodge viper"... can you offer me some sort of explanation to this? I didn't see anything in his profile that would help clarify that. I'm probably just being an idiot.
Prophet- Excluding the overuse of dude, i would say that your verse flowed nicely, but it was simple in places. I really hope that you did write that in 2 minutes, cause that would be fucking amazing. Though why do you gotta mention you're in a black school?
"Never say that i'm gangster, (Now that's gangster)"
-Proof & Swifty
Anyway. I could use some votes, I wanna finish this one off. I know gangster already voted here.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ght=Xpress+Lane