YO this flowed very nice man , ..i was feeling some parts of ur verse very nice..some lines made me think twice, ..personal aspects in it, ..made it even more interesting, ..

My LandLord wouldn't change my Lease
If I had one..
Just so I couldn't be Differ-Rent to peeps
I sadden..
Like discrimination of Asians in Chruch
Theres no Alter-Asian..I'm feeling hurt.

Liked these lines , ..vocab fitted the concept..structure was nice, ....real nice read = ) ..

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