Carnage:

CarNage bout ta hand lyrical bruizingz, an' get under ur skin like blood "tranzfusionz"/ (<nice punch)
1-1..rec AngryCraka only excelz at losen', u'll get hit wit tha mic till ur left wit evalastin' "contusionz"/
^coulda refined this, made a "sharper" point, but good line

Don't worry kid I'll give the word to yah "Momma" about how u died from this verbal heat "TRAUMA"/
leave your faggot ass "6 FEET DEEP" like that "HBO DRAMA"/
^Structure suffered here, but decent line.

fINISHER

Your bleed’n like a virgin, hurten, gettin penetrated for the "first-time"/ (<nice- good meta)
Ya best is my worse-rhyme, I’m spitt’n sciptures with a "cursed-mind"//
^Strong closer. Nice verse.

Angry Cracka:

fuckin telephone modem kicked me off, wtf....
^ This was ya best line...lol j/k

Hold up, yeah kid, you know I can bust ya open/
Let the bitch post first so he cant say his fingers broken/
^ lotta filler, no REAL punches tho.

You must be a speed bag cuz I'm always landing punches/
My lines cut up ya stomach more than doing crunches/
^good bar-decent snaps

Only time he got some, just put his hand in his pocket/
Just quit RB now, fool, cuz ya know that ya just lost-it/
^strong first closer line, but the last one lacked the punch needed to take it.

Breakdown:
Open: Car
Close: Car
Meta's: Car
Creativity: Car
Flow: Angry

Vote: Carnage