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Old 12-06-03, 01:56 PM   #5
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This was pretty good i thought....worth the read.....structure was ok, could have been better though, your lines seemed all over with the long ones and short ones, try keeping them around the same length though so it helps the flow....add more internals to this to make it flow better as well....but overall this was alright...keep at it.
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