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Re: Chaos of Conflicting Thoughts
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Originally posted by ...::ËMËRGË::...
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Ok this peice is very deep, and i hope you guys can get all the metaphors and fully comprehend the lines.
I'm dead awake sleeping, deep thoughts creep in
Apathetic weaping, glorious vicacious reaping
Boundless imperfections, un-unified sections
Uncontagious infections, unneeded painless injections
Intact thoughts shattered, mind under matter
Decending stepless ladders, atomic bonds scattered
Surviving my body rots, empty stomach in endless knots
These are the effects in manifesting Chaos of Conflicting Thoughts
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ight the whole opening was real dope your whole vocab fit threw verse perfect and your flow was str8 fire
then at the ending it gave me the idea of the whole concept reeal well which i thought it was rreally ILL.....
good job afterall
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