By a friend of mine, posted by me. Critique.

Love and Hate, four years to this date, I cannot keep living in this state. A rollar coaster of emotional tremors, I thought it would be you and me, for worse and for better. How many girls have passed you by, you let them use and abuse you, why? None of these girls happened to be me. You didn't feel like being happy? You wanted ass, I see. I jumped in the water and tried to drown, or tie a noose and hang myself when you weren't around. But with time comes change, wisdom and age, you made me so lonely, I'm over that stage. You made me so happy, I wanted to kill myself, having you around was bad for my health. I wanted you to kiss, then slit my wrists, nothing to grab as I'm sucked into your abyss. I try to move on, everyday I try, each time it gets harder as I catch your eye. I think I'm in love, but no longer with you, now I know you're worth nothing, you know that it's true. You're so low, I'm high above, you're the only boy I ever hated to love.